Feedback From My Pitch Presentation

This is the feedback that I have gotten from the students in my class about my pitch presentation. 

I created my powerpoint on google drive, then opened it up so that everyone could go round to read it and give it feedback. 

We were told to give two positive comments, then something that we could improve on.

I have found this task very helpful as I know what I can do to add onto my presentation and in order for it to be a lot more informative.